Game Rental Landing pages.

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• • This page has no proper flow
  • the text is too clutered in the grey boxes.
  • the logo of the advertisers are way too blended
  • NO call to action box
  • the “one” , “two” , “three” buttons should be in numeric form and are way too large
  • TRYING TOO HARD TO LOOK LIKE WEB 2.0
    

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• • This page is better thant the last one
  • Again trying to hard to look like web 2.0
  • The reflections are distracting the viewers
  • Call to action is too blended with the background
  • The colors constrast sucks.

Web Hosting Landing pages

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• • The above page probably has zero conversions
  • You do not know where to click as buttons not standing out
  • Information overload
  • the layout sucks
  • too many images and not enough text. They will have bad QS

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• • too many advertisers and this will just confuse readers
  • prices not current
  • buttons needs better look
  • Overall the layout and flow is good
  • Good Navigation on top
  • Good color choices

Credit Report Landing pages

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• • THERE IS NO LAYOUT!
  • too many call to action buttons
  • too much white space
  • No flow
  • The text is all over the place
  • images have borders in blue which looks unprofessional

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• • too much text
  • the call to action is too small
  • the text doesnt look like attractive enough to click
  • Overall good layout
  • good use of side boxes
  • Needs few bigger images for ppc
  • This will suit really good for serps .

• • Good layout
  • Call to action can be better
  • Good heading
  • Text is be aligned to left as thats where users tend to look first
  • The logo needs better blending