Game Rental Landing pages.

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• • This page has no proper flow
  • the text is too clutered in the grey boxes.
  • the logo of the advertisers are way too blended
  • NO call to action box
  • the “one” , “two” , “three” buttons should be in numeric form and are way too large
  • TRYING TOO HARD TO LOOK LIKE WEB 2.0
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